Front Cover – The title needs to be bolder and I think that there should be more writing, especially near the bottom of the page. Consider using another colour because you’ve only got blue and black because of the magazine that it is in comparison with is quite vibrant and stands out. There should be some sort of bleed as it will look effective.
Contents Page – The title is fine. Make the part that has all the contents in a bit bigger because there is a lot of room on the page. The pictures will work better. Make it link to your cover with the font and colours.
Double Page Spread – I think that it’s a good double page spread and I like the layout. The title is good, but I’d go for a different colour as you’ve already used it on your front cover and contents page. Maybe have another pull quote that would be pretty cool.
Sabrina Boukhalfa
Front Cover - The title is very cool, but needs to be bigger and bolder. There should be a lot more writing on the cover and more graphics should be used to make the magazine look a lot more like the style of genre you want to achieve.
Contents Page - The contents page looks nice, but the colours should be a bit different or the style even.
Double Page Spread - I think that it looks good but you need to change how the model is going to pose so that it looks closer to the style of genre you want to achieve.
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